Working hard in our library time researching the Commonwealth countries we have chosen.
We are Room 2, a class of Year 3's at Pukete School in Hamilton, New Zealand. We hope you enjoy sharing our learning.
Thursday, 28 August 2014
Monday, 11 August 2014
Autumn Leaves Writing
Autumn Leaves
Brown and orange cover the ground like mud.
Crumpled edges as bright as the sun
twirling from the tree.
They crash to the ground like a
crackling like a witch, the veins are the only things that survived.
The leaves are orange like lava.
Beth
Leaves lay in a pile like a colourful
carpet.
They flutter down like a butterfly.
The crunch is as loud as a lions
roar.
Thousands of colourful leaves gently
touch the ground like little silky feathers landing on your finger tip.
Shades of brown, red, orange and
yellow coming together like chocolate and caramel, slowly come to an end.
Paige
Down the tree comes a group of leaves
gold like the stars.
They make a soft blanket like a quilt
on a bed.
They crunch like when someone’s
eating a crunchie bar.
Sun shines on the leaves and makes
them glow as bright as glow worms.
The leaves turn as brown as chocolate
and crunch up when someone touches them.
Mia
Golden and brown leaves twirl on to
the ground like ballerinas.
On the ground they look like a
colourful carpet.
They feel like crunched up paper and
sound like toast when you bite into it.
Becky
Bright colours, yellow, brown, red
and orange gently float along with the wind.
Gracefully they land like aeroplanes
that have just started coming in.
Piles of leaves like carpets lie
softly on the ground as soft as sheep’s skin.
Leaves sit peacefully on the end of
branches like people waiting at the top of slides.
Beams of sunrays make the leaves look
like gold.
I love leaves in autumn.
Lily
Leaves shoot past me like shooting
stars crashing to the ground.
Floating leaves are dark brown like
delicious dairy milk chocolate.
A waterfall of colourful leaves fall
to the ground and form a soft crunchy pillow like the pillow on my bed.
Jessica
Leaves as yellow as the sun spread
across the ground like a carpet.
They twirl like a ballerina down from
the tree.
Crunch, they crumple up like paper.
They are as colourful as a rainbow.
When the sun shines on them they glow
like bright glow worms.
Jaylah
Black and White Zentagle Leaves
As part of our autumn writing we created zentagle leaves for our art.
We used indian ink and bamboo skewers to create our designs.
We used indian ink and bamboo skewers to create our designs.
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